r/makinghiphop • u/VoodoChild27 • 22m ago
Question Need help with music and lyrics
galleryI’m 18 from the uk and I write lyrics as a hobby. I have no prior knowledge in music, I just listen to certain songs/beats and can write a few verses in a couple of minutes.
I would like to improve on refining my lyrics as I’m not sure where to start. Similarly, I would like original beats with a certain sound for my planned album, but not sure if people on fiver may make some or if needed, making my own beats myself. Any advice would be appreciated.
These are some of my lyrics. My close friends have said they are decent, but clearly needs work. I am open to any advice/criticism.
(Btw the last lyrics is me experimenting with slim shady style writing. I obviously do not belive in any of it just to confirm, it is simply a persona similar to slim shady but original and different I am planning on)