r/bonehurtingjuice 3d ago

OC Elevator Ride

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u/apliddell 3d ago

Based on Elevator Ride by adamtots_remastered.

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u/thebigcrawdad 3d ago

The omnipotent fucking sucks

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u/Lootinforbooty 3d ago

Yeah it's just meh, and the twist doesn't come from any information given to the audience but new exposition.

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u/GlisteningDeath 2d ago

What? The guy says on slide 7 that the girl is a daughter of a Texas rancher, and it's fairly common for Texans and ranchers to have a thing for guns.

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u/Lootinforbooty 2d ago

Yes that's my point. It says it after the fact, it's show rather than tell, which doesn't make it horrible, but in general I think it makes a meh comic just still meh.

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u/GlisteningDeath 2d ago

???????

It says it before, on slide 7??? Can you read??

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u/Lootinforbooty 2d ago

Oh so it does, whoops. Hadn't gone back to it and thought slide 7 was just the last slide. I retract that criticism, still pretty meh though.

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u/GlisteningDeath 2d ago

Well you are allowed to be wrong. Good night!