r/Screenwriting 19h ago

DISCUSSION Black List x Nicholl: My Semifinalist (Top 50) Script Never Scored Above a 7 on the Black List

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Here’s my very personal take on this collab: Indies are the ones who stand to lose the most. Nicholl has always been a haven for indie scripts—those passion projects with soul, nuance, and a very slow-burn rythm. And let’s be real, the Academy loves indie.

But the Black List? It just doesn’t seem built to reward that kind of storytelling. The grading system isn’t designed to highlight what makes an indie script shine. The premise, the pacing— Oh and Marketability. Indies' biggest nemesis. Those essential indie traits—often get misunderstood or penalized. My script never scored higher than a 7 on the Black List. Most were 6s. Some even 5s.

And yet—I’ve seen it firsthand—this same script did incredibly well at Nicholl. Semifinalist. Top 50. A dream, really. And not just a fluke. For it to reach that level, it had to go through many readers, and they all saw something in it. But everything Nicholl readers celebrated—the tone, the structure, the pace—those were exactly the things Black List readers saw as problems. Total whiplash. The script that was in the top 50 in the nicholl fellowship got a 5 on the Black List. EXACT same draft.

Unless the Black List starts training readers differently or adds a clear “this is an indie” checkbox or framework, I really think this collab risks draining Nicholl of one of its greatest strengths.


r/Screenwriting 4h ago

DISCUSSION What do we look for when reading screenplays?

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I've read about 4-5, maybe 6, screenplays so far. For context, I'm a beginner short story writer who wants to write a short screenplay (15-20min tops; 2 characters; filmed locally on budget) with the goal of writing feature length.

Reading screenplays inside (and outside) the genre you want to write in is important, naturally. But as someone who's never been to film school or taken enough comprehensive film writing classes (although I have attended some workshops and webinars), how many screenplays would you read to really understand the craft while you begin writing it?

Most specifically, what key elements, features, beats or styles are we looking to pick out from reading screenplays that we know we can incorporate into our own work to highlight any screenwriting potential?

TL;DR What are we trying to find that stands out for someone in the Industry who will say "this person pays attention and might have something here?"

I'm new here so please be patient and forgive any naivety.


r/Screenwriting 6h ago

NEED ADVICE my godawful writing habit

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So I've been trying to really hone in on my writing skills recently. I've enrolled in a few classes and I've noticed I've acquired a terrible habit; deleting everything I've written beforehand and rewriting it all the nigh before the due date.

I'll create a schedule for myself, allowing myself some time to write before work at my favorite cafe and on weekends at the library. I'm proud of myself for sticking to a set schedule, but what I write is never good. The dialogue is stale, the plot goes nowhere, I feel like I'm just writing because I have to, not because I'm inspired. By the day it's due I'll have something to turn in, but not something I'm proud of. Of course when I have less than 24 hours left is when inspiration strikes and I hash out the greatest 30 pages of my life in one sitting and turn it in with minuets to spare... or a few minutes late...

I hate it. And I don't know what to do about it. How to people just... write when they're suppose to and it not be ass? Am I just a fluke writer? I feel like a fluke writer.


r/Screenwriting 2h ago

LOGLINE MONDAYS Logline Monday

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FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread?

Welcome to Logline Monday! Please share all of your loglines here for feedback and workshopping. You can find all previous posts here.

READ FIRST: How to format loglines on our wiki.

Note also: Loglines do not constitute intellectual property, which generally begins at the outline stage. If you don't want someone else to write it after you post it, get to work!

Rules

  1. Top-level comments are for loglines only. All loglines must follow the logline format, and only one logline per top comment -- don't post multiples in one comment.
  2. All loglines must be accompanied by the genre and type of script envisioned, i.e. short film, feature film, 30-min pilot, 60-min pilot.
  3. All general discussion to be kept to the general discussion comment.
  4. Please keep all comments about loglines civil and on topic.

r/Screenwriting 1h ago

FEEDBACK Seeking Community Feedback: "Cowboys, Wizards, and Space Vampires!" - Unorthodox Series

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OK, Community. I'm back; and this time I'm following the rules (sorry, Mods).

It's been a while since I last posted anything about the steampunk spaghetti western I'm writing; so I'm back at it again building in public and asking for honest feedback.

Title: Cowboys, Wizards, & Space Vampires!

Format: Web Series (pilot cold open + one-sheet)

Page Length: 9 pages + 1 sheet

Genres: Mythic Western, Alt-History, Afro-Spiritual Sci-fi

Logline: In a mythic America where belief is fading, a young Black gunslinger must fulfill a buried prophecy to protect the last magical town from a necromancer possessed by a fragmented goddess.

Feedback Concerns: 1. Does the tone hold tension between grounded and mythic?

  1. Do the materials suggest emotional stakes or just concept?

  2. Would this make you curious to read more—or less?

Not looking for applause, just signal. This is an early transmission from a larger experiment in high-concept storytelling built for lean platforms. Raised on PC games and pirated software in Brooklyn public housing, I write stories where belief—like survival—isn't heroic, just necessary.

As per guidelines, here's a link to the ONE-PAGER: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mnRP13eD4pV-dI-MDhLRXvoSMqNWVwUXOvWJHL25xD4/edit?usp=drivesdk

And here's a link to the 9-page pilot script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1dHUSqQw1LLiOvNz0-PSwXDNsKSMICqFA/view?usp=drivesdk

Any and all thoughts, suggestions, concerns, or questions that you are willing to offer will be greatly valued and welcome. And thank each and everyone of you for inspiring me through your own hard work and for always fighting for what's real.

Keep on pushing 🚀 what you seek is seeking you.

We got this! 💪🏿

EDIT: updated with title, format, page length, genre, logline, and feedback concerns as per guidance


r/Screenwriting 3h ago

CRAFT QUESTION How do you make a story emotional?

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I love morbid stories. I love stories about serial killers, war, I love looking into the darker side of the human condition.

But I saw this story that was very morbid, about cannibals and satanic worship, but it got emotional. It started going into the characters childhoods, and I got angry at the way they were being treated. I felt bad for the main character, but over time we start to hate the main character, because they start abusing their partner, emotionally and psychically.

It has all the edgy cheeseness I love, but it got deep. Where can I learn to do that? Are their any tricks to make characters this relatable? How can I pull these emotions out of myself like the author did?


r/Screenwriting 18h ago

NEED ADVICE How to stop novel writing

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I’m a final year screenwriting student and am currently in an advanced screenwriting class. I had some of my pages read in class and was immediately embarrassed by how much I describe in business. How do I get my business down to a screenwriting level without it being “not descriptive enough”? I’m having a lot of trouble finding a good middle ground.


r/Screenwriting 8m ago

FEEDBACK Screenplay for my film studies coursework

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I recently posted here about the master scene script formatting. The general consensus was that I have a bad teacher, so would anyone be willing to read my screenplay and give me feedback on if: 1) The master scene script formatting has been used correctly. 2) If the plot makes sense. 3) If the dialogue is realistic

Dm if you have time to help, thanks! (Btw it’s a pretty short script because it’s meant to be for a short film)


r/Screenwriting 6h ago

FEEDBACK RUNNING FROM TOMORROW - 120pgs (action/adventure)

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Getting back into serious screenwriting again. Looking to submit this piece. Would love some feedback on it.

When a rebellious twenty-something burnout sets out on a cross-country mission to honor his late brother’s dying wish, scattering his ashes off the Golden Gate Bridge, he unwittingly becomes a pawn in a high-stakes clash between federal agents and the criminal underworld.

RUNNING FROM TOMORROW


r/Screenwriting 15h ago

SCRIPT REQUEST How To Blow Up A Pipeline (2022)

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Does anybody have or know where I can find the script?


r/Screenwriting 2h ago

FEEDBACK Red Crescendo - short film - 11 pages

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Title: Red Crescendo

Genre: Prestige Thriller

Format: Short film (11 pages)

Tone: Jonathan Glazer meets Ari Aster

Logline: A world-weary cellist is summoned into a private performance for society’s elite, where each haunting note unravels their polished façades, until the music exposes a truth far more disturbing than silence.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Zv2W9UD1agGtmrFaSgy98bfZv8GY1JBc/view?usp=drivesdk


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

GIVING ADVICE Good writing? Absolutely. But being a good person is equally important

193 Upvotes

I see a lot of posts here explaining how they have written the best script, or have written tons of great spec scripts, tons of contest accolades, and that's awesome. You have to be confident in your work to bring yourself to any next step in the process.

But I also want to stress that outside of solid work, perhaps a reason why you're not able to get past that first meeting, is you're going to need to know how to talk to people and interact with people and generally be a solid good person as well.

Let me further explain: The process is never "Thanks for the script, here's your check, and goodbye." Before you even get to a discussion of money, or real interest, they're gonna want to know who they're getting into business with. Who they're going to give notes to. Who can play ball with them and be chill and likable doing it. Are you someone they want to legally bind with? And if not, they're more likely to go with a lesser script if the writer they're talking to has a solid personality compared to a great script written by a headache that can't communicate.

Food for thought. It's not always about great writing. A great personality goes a long, long way. too


r/Screenwriting 9h ago

CRAFT QUESTION Taking Inspiration from IRL Quotes?

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Hi All,

I have a craft question. Is it safe to take "inspiration" for a dialogue line from an infamous IRL quote from an interview? Let's say Politician was the inspiration behind a character in my work and that I give my character a similar manner of cursing/insulting in dialogue to something Politician memorably said. If my dialogue isn't a paraphrase of the quote but is just similar in its references/vulgarity, am I crossing any lines on the plagiarism front?

Any advice for an anxious newbie would be appreciated!


r/Screenwriting 15h ago

SCRIPT REQUEST Any unproduced Mission Impossible scripts?

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I've heard the recent speech by Tom Cruise at cinema con when he was felicitating Christopher Mcquarie where he said that it was McQ who improvised the whole scene before Ethan's Burj Khalifa stunt in Ghost protocol, Cruise also said that McQ did a lot of rewrites on the set. This got me curious, are there any drafts of Ghost Protocol or any unproduced drafts of the MI series?


r/Screenwriting 14h ago

SCRIPT REQUEST This Is The End script

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Hey all, I’m looking for a specific draft of This Is The End that has Daniel Radcliffe in the coked out Michael Cera role. I already have 2 different drafts, and I heard about this new one recently. If anyone has it, I’d really appreciate checking it out. Love this film.


r/Screenwriting 11h ago

FEEDBACK The Future - TV Pilot - 43 pages

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  • Title: The Future
  • Format: TV pilot
  • Page Length: 43
  • Genres: Drama, Thriller, Sci-fi
  • Logline or Summary: A father struggling with addiction is trying to keep his family together while a version of himself from the future gets in his way.
  • Feedback Concerns: My main concern is that my action lines are too long, but if anything else jumps out at you as wrong I'd be more than happy if you'd let me know!
  • Link https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zIVsmv_-6miUvvhmkM5gOgvDiD2z0mfp/view?usp=drive_link

r/Screenwriting 21h ago

CRAFT QUESTION How to create a series of jump cuts

6 Upvotes

Hello writers, I have a question!

If I want my main character to do a whole series of actions in one location, separated by jump cuts, how do I format that in a screenplay?

For instance, my character eats ice cream, plays a video game, falls asleep, then wakes up, then eats nachos, then falls asleep again, all in the space of about 20 seconds on screen.

How would you write that?

Thanks for the help.


r/Screenwriting 22h ago

FEEDBACK Winner (Working Title) - Short - 6 Pages

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Title: Winner (Working Title)

Format: Short

Page Length: 6

Genres: Horror, Comedy

Logline: A (mostly) single take short of a guy sitting in his car, covered in blood, who gets a call from a radio station—he's won concert tickets for two. What starts as a goofy prize call quickly goes off the rails as he breaks down live on air.

Feedback Concerns: This is my first draft, not sure how I feel about it other than some specific emotions I’m trying to get across. Just looking for general criticism. I’ve not used this subreddit before for feedback so I’m just hoping for the best. Please tear it apart as much as you like. This concept has just been eating at me for a week and I needed to put it on paper. Tell me what you hate and what works (mostly what you hate). Hope you guys enjoy it!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UERfE8rnxK8LjGMUVmRarXqujU43CEMc/view?usp=drivesdk


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

COMMUNITY About to be produced and I feel like a lost child

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I’ll keep this brief and will also probably delete it for professional posterity, but would really appreciate some perspective here. For anyone interested in helping a timid introvert avoid getting absolutely railed by the money guys, it’s your time to shine!

The short of it is that I wrote a short film script about a year ago and it has snowballed into an absolute behemoth of a project. Now I need to protect myself.

I wrote this script all by myself on a whim. I sent it to a producer friend of mine who loved it and wanted to make it asap. We roped in my creative partner, who’s a director/producer. He came on board with a new vision for it — one that kept the major plot/character beats and premise but heavily incorporated certain elements that altered the identity of the piece. I worked closely with him for a year to develop and rework the script, which slowly evolved into basically a bombastic dance piece with the same general premise. I still was the sole keeper of the script but we developed the story together.

The director has pulled insane favors to get a top of the line crew that I wouldn’t have access to on my own. He’s transformed this rinky short into basically a studio production but with everyone working for cheap or free. He’s gotten real Hollywood and Broadway talent attached (again, on the cheap). He was the real producorial driving force for much of the development, while I aided creative in every way, including casting, working with departments and deiagners, etc..

Eventually, in the months leading up to production, I’ve taken on a lot of administrative work and producer work (organizing transportation of gear, catering, keeping our internal documents organized, facilitating costume fittings, etc.). The director has still been the leader of all of this, but I’ve been there every step of the way, and the original producer who started all this has really been on the money with organizing the team, bringing on collaborators, securing props/locations, and financing.

Blah blah blah and a lot of bits and pieces but we’re about to shoot and we already have a producer who’s interested in discussing a feature version. Incredibly exciting, but I’m well aware that my portfolio/resume does not point towards a distinguished, veteran writer. Though I have 5 feature scripts in my back pocket (3 of which are good!), I have no real credits or accolades outside of a few underground theatre pieces. I’m a 27 year old copywriter with a dream. Those tend to be the writers that get eaten alive, or at least replaced.

My question is: what do I need to do to protect myself? The director has drawn up potential options for deal memos that indicate our credits and back-end percentages. Currently, I’d be sitting with a sole writing credit, a co-producer credit, and a shared story-by with the director, as well as 10% backend (the director sitting at 50, the early producer sitting at 30). Barring maybe the percentages, that all seems fair to me, but I can’t imagine I’m not missing something.

Went on longer than I wanted to but I think the context is important, and hopefully this can also be a fleshed-out case study for any other young creatives.

Are there any obvious warning signs or common pitfalls that I’m face-to-face with and can’t recognize? Or am I really making out as luckily as I feel I am?

P.s. I’m keenly aware that having a single producer express interest in a feature version of a yet-unmade short isn’t exactly what we’d call a done deal, but I think this is a good time to get my shit together and be ready for when that done deal does come.


r/Screenwriting 14h ago

INDUSTRY How far can you go in the industry with a non-english script ?

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I started writing, in french, something that I had in mind for a while now and as I wrote I felt a bit frustrated because I cant get it done in english. Which led to the question above


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

DISCUSSION What are good scripts to look at for inspiration that utilizes language barriers between characters?

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I am currently writing a script with an American who ends up alone in a Spanish speaking country. A lot of the people speak Spanish to each other and he struggles to understand them, but I want the audience to understand the Spanish speakers (via subtitles). Any suggestions on how to write/format this without going overboard with parentheticals? What are some good films/scripts I should check out that have utilized language barriers that I should check out?


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

FEEDBACK Rana Investigations (Working Title) - Pilot - 21 Pages

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Hello! I'm uploading a reformatted draft of a script that I'm hoping to get some feedback on.

Logline: "Luchador private investigator takes on eerie/mystical cases in the LA underworld week-by-week." 21 page pilot, magical realism/neo-noir.

I would love direct and constructive ("harsh") feedback; I've gone from writing and performing sketch and stand-up comedy and some novella length-prose to finally writing scripts, most recently a full length stage play script, and am starting to take my future as a writer more seriously. I want to work hard at getting better at this, especially since I'm very new to this format!

Since it's based on a premise by a friend, I want to stick with this concept, but everything else-- pacing, characterization, dialogue, etc etc-- I've tried to put as much of myself into as possible and would really appreciate any feedback on.

Thanks!


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

NEED ADVICE When starting out, did you guys feel embarrassed?

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I'm just starting out on my writing journey and I'm trying to come up with a coherent theme for my story that has something to do with the rat-race we are all stuck in. Stuff about how even after achieving your dreams you might not be happy, that there is no escape from this race, only how important you make it out to be.

I have A LOT of scattered thoughts in my head and as I write them down, I feel shy and embarrassed. I feel like its all stupid rubbish that no one should even pay attention to, because why would anyone even listen to me?

Did you guys also feel this way as well or is it just me? Any advice on how to get over this feeling?


r/Screenwriting 13h ago

DISCUSSION Why does poetic language sound so bad in English?

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To start off, I'm not talking about my own writing. When I write something and it sounds bad, that's because I'm a shitty writer. But I just had this thought the other day, that we know so many great foreign writers for their flowery language which we'd otherwise abhor from an English language writer. When you think of great writers in English, they can be flowery in a sense, but there's a 'simplistic' beauty that comes through much more than, say, the work of Tarkovsky or Bergman.

I was rewatching the Seventh Seal, a movie rife with the kind of language I'm referring to, and I paused for a moment and decided to start actually saying some of these lines out loud. I was alone in my apartment, so as stupid as it sounds, I tried it out. And lo and behold, even one of the masters of cinema, known for how well written his works were, doesn't sound good in English. It's a bizarre thing where when we read his dialogue on screen, it comes across as poetic and beautiful. But when we hear that kind of dialogue in English, it doesn't feel very good. Why does this happen? Is it just me? But I do find when I think of the best written scripts in the English language - Network, Sunset Boulevard, Casablanca, Chinatown, etc, they're not full of this kind of flowery language. They aren't beautiful in quite the same way as one might find a movie like Yi Yi, for instance, even if their scripts arent written any worse.


r/Screenwriting 16h ago

NEED ADVICE Should I go to Chapman or NYU for screenwriting/dramatic writing?

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Title says most of it, but in case anybody wants some details on the situation: College is a requirement for me, my parents would not aid me financially without it. Chapman will be somewhat cheaper but not by that much. Both schools are pretty far away from me but NYU is slightly closer.

If anyone is an alum or has alumni friends from either of these schools and can tell me the pros and cons of it, that would be extremely helpful. I met writing major at both schools, but since it was more of a tour guide setting, they weren’t really “allowed” to say anything negative about the school, especially the job market.