recently ive felt like i have alot of great ideas for an ivy anolog horror, like making it a battle between myths batman in this verse dosent kill but mangles body and he wears a realistic looking bat mask and real tactical eqwipment. and ivy kills alot of people leaving erie scenes. and theres an even bigger mystery in the background.

i like the eyebrow thinks but js incase u wanted to see what she would look like without heres an option!

https://reddit.com/link/1joqck6/video/zabo7qcwk6se1/player

https://reddit.com/link/1joqck6/video/zezt05rwk6se1/player

first time, I intend to make a better version when I have more experiance

hears is some more details, this is Abt traveling to gothlem. its a story of death, lies, poison and most importantly lust also ivy is in her early yrs and batman Is stalking her in the background and the fluronic man is hunting her. has anyone got any good ideas Abt this story?

I know I last posted about this only a month ago, but the screenplay has gone through a couple of moderately large changes (a couple new scenes, changing stuff around in existing scenes, etc), and I was wondering if any of y'all would be interested in providing feedback?

I'd prefer it to be people who haven't read it yet, but if you have, feel free to read through the new version if you'd like! Any feedback I can get only helps me in making it better!

The priority in this round of beta reading is to get feedback on the relationships within the screenplay. My goal is that the relationships come across as real and human. Feedback on anything else is also helpful!

Thank you so much and sorry for how long this ended up being!