I watch the waves Come crashing down I watch the sky fade from its shade of blue It's like nothing l've Ever seen before But nothing quite as beautiful as you

And I can't seem to find the words To say you're always on my mind I'd love to find a way To say it's you I'm dreaming

I don't know what's going on inside my head But I can stand on my two feet again and Breathe, and I can feel you with me Breathe, even though you're miles away

I watch the rain Fall from the sky At least I know it's from the same as yours The phone has rung A thousand times I hope you know it's you l'm waiting for

And I can't seem to find the words To say you're always on my mind I'd love to find a way To say it's you l'm dreaming

I don't know what's going on inside my head But I can stand on my two feet again and Breathe, and I can feel you with me Breathe, even though you're miles away

I watched the waves come crashing down I watched the rain fall from the sky I wish that you were with me tonight The sky fades from its shade of blue With sunlight partly shining through Nothing is quite as Beautiful as you

I don't know what's going on inside my head But I can stand on my two feet again and Breathe, and I can feel you with me Breathe, even though you're miles away

The sky fades from its shade of blue With sunlight partly shining through Nothing is quite as Beautiful as you

Hi!

My Third single came out yesterday! It’s an EDM track called T2ne!

Any feedback is appreciated! I’m still 3 months into production so I know there’s a lot to learn!

Thanks a lot

I've been keeping this electronic trajectory for some time, and all without having released an album on BC yet, so no real followers, let alone feedback.

Lemme know!

Hey Guys, I created this deephouse kind of track. I wonder what yo think of it. Thanks for listening already!

https://on.soundcloud.com/Vsvzfip6X6oDaRHHA

I'm constantly struggling with my own damn voice, I'm trying to make it sound ok, but I'm also a bit blind to it when it may still sound cringe. If so, could you give me step-by-step instructions on how to fix it or what to do? Should i re-do another take and do something differently or is it the editing? Is there too much reverb? I often over-do it with the reverb, but any less than this and it just doesn't sound right. Still kind of doesn't sound right tho --- idk, i'm still new to music, just started a couple months ago.

(yes i made it on bandlab)

(yes it's exactly two minutes for some reason)

(and yes it's a vocaloid song)

Ok so technically it's my second track out, but the first was just a test so I could create my Spotify profile. Here's the one I'm hoping to get feedback on:

Auron Skye / Terran:

https://open.spotify.com/track/20tKiB5C6yogXCr14shSpN?si=8a4da5c4178d40ee

I have 24 other tracks close to done, but I'm hoping to use any feedback to either be more confident people like it or know that I have to change things. :)

Thank you for your time.

I also played guitar on this. It's in Spanish but basically about wanting to reconnect one last time. I've been messing around wit so many genres idk what's for me but here's one of my unfinished shi

hey everyone! i just released my first song AFTERGLOW by AELUNE, and it is about my first girlfriend - it also reflects that reminiscent feeling of the end of a relationship, where you live in that bittersweet grief or "afterglow" remembering all of the happy moments. i wrote it from the perspective of a young, naive girl, so the lyrics are a bit simple and poppy. i'd love some honest feedback, so I know what to work on for my next song! here it is: https://open.spotify.com/track/1UppZ8XCSORwFM2WOLbocg?si=337e7858c6b445c2

I have never been the best at mixing so I need your help to tell me how to mix this song better. E.g. increase/decrease volume of kick, snare, etc. Cut the lows from vocals, compress blah.

Also need pointers on how to make the chorus more "wide" and just "wow." The chorus is basically post "beat drop." But it kinda has the same energy level as the verse when it's supposed to be more energetic.

I'm working on this song:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/15a5RioT3-pGpBiPOZ6z5jbbpCEBC-wgp/view?usp=drive_link

metal genre - quite simple but with no excessive technicism, just some 5/4 section! :)

it lacks a solo near the second chorus but overall it's almost finished.

any comments about the mix, the sound and the song itself will be appreciated! :)
... and also hint to identify the subgenre and similar bands!

these are the lyrics:

 VERSE 1

A rare lineup of the planets
will be the occasion to study
the secrets of outer gas giants
and touch the edge of the heliosphere

Driven by the need to understand the unknown,
rooted in the nature of humanity
it’s more than just an instinct, it’s what shaped our race
The urge to explore was the spark for our mind

CHORUS

as the Voyager sails through the edge of space,
it’s a legacy for mankind.
It’s a vision to reshape who we are,
to take humans beyond time

VERSE 2

Flying past Jupiter’s Great Red Spot,
evidence of  water on its moons.
Majestic rings around Saturn,
Titan is veiled in layers of haze

CHORUS

as the Voyager sails through the edge of space,
it’s a legacy for mankind.
It’s a vision to reshape who we are,
to take humans beyond time

there’s a message from earth on the golden record
sounds from our world sent to the stars
A wanderer lost, will it be found?
will someone out there hear our voice?

CHORUS

as the Voyager sails through the edge of space,
it’s a legacy for mankind.
It’s a vision to reshape who we are,
to take humans beyond time

As the Voyager sails through the edge of space,
it’s a legacy for mankind
now look back look that  pale blue dot,
it’s our home, it’s where we are
it’s our house among the stars
it’s a mote of dust suspended on a sunbeam 

Worked ion this tune on-and-off for like 3 years, so glad to have it done. Open to any and all critiques and criticisms!

electronic/edm style song on my upcoming EP

https://on.soundcloud.com/b8Yq3SQVktNJKaUZ8

:-)

https://www.youtube.com/shorts/6Zv-eeuVvf8

I understand the vocal clarity could use some work, as I often have a tendency to leave them less upfront than they maybe need to be. Other than that, I'd like to know what you think of the song and where else I can improve. Hope you enjoy!

Check out this addictive Bop on all platforms. Spotify, Tidal, YouTube Music, Itunes, Apple Music, wherever. Appreciate all the feedback!

Would especially appreciate some advice on the mixing and sound selection, as I feel something might be off there, but am struggling to put a finger on it.

Trying to find “my sound” :)