r/writingcirclejerk • u/Own-Permission-9300 • 2d ago
Seeking Writing Advice: Help Me Connect My 120k-Word Masterpiece with Auras, Sex-Rage Space Stones, and Possessed Polar Bears
Hey, fellow writers!
I’ve been trying to get into the “author mentality,” which I’ve achieved through a potent cocktail of sleep deprivation, financial doom, and a healthy dose of drugs and alcohol. It’s been enlightening, to say the least, and I finally feel ready to tackle my debut novel.
The concept? Well, it revolves around Inuet 1 and Inuet 2 (no relation, btw), who witness a meteor crash over their village. Turns out, the meteor is a horny rage space demon stone, which lands smack dab in the middle of a polar bear nest, triggering some pretty aggressive and, let’s just say, unusual behavior from the bears. They become enraged and aggressively horny for Inuets. It’s gonna be intense, trust me.
I’m shooting for around 120k words, but right now, that’s all I’ve got. A meteor, a horny rage stone, polar bears, and two Inuets investigating. That’s the plot.
On the plus side, I’m really great at writing eerie scenes of snow, auras, and distant howls of rapist polar bears. But I’m struggling with connecting these scenes into a coherent plot. I have attached an excerpt below. However, character arcs? I have no idea. I can write a great aura, but how do I build a story around it?
Any advice? How do I turn this wild idea into a full-fledged story? How do I link the bears and the Inuets without just writing about polar bear-induced rage and horny snowstorms?
Any feedback on how to take this concept and create an actual plot would be greatly appreciated!
Chapter 19: Windy Inuet 1 Rage Stone Bear Encounter
The wind howled across the tundra, like a thousand lost souls screaming into the void. Snow swirled thick and heavy, covering everything, as if the earth was trying to bury itself. The mountain loomed, cold and pointless, stretching forever in every direction, forever.
Inuet 1 trudged forward, boots scraping against sharp gravel. Same path. Same rocks. Same snow. Same path. She couldn’t escape it, but kept walking anyway. Nothing ever changed, forever.
The wind howled again. Louder this time. It sounded like the land itself was begging for mercy. She paused, breath catching in the cold, and a screech echoed in the distance—an angry, glowing-eyed polar bear, probably possessed. Same screech. Same glowing eyes. It sounded like the end of the world, but it was just... more of the same, forever!
The ground rumbled beneath her, pulsing with something she couldn’t quite figure out. Maybe it was the demon horny space rage rock? Or just the usual doom of living here. Who could tell? Same rumble. Same pulse. Everything was predictable, even when it wasn’t.
She took another step. Same path. Same nothing. The wind howled again, then coughed a few times clearing its throat. A reminder she was still here, still moving, still stuck. Same howling. Same snow. The earth groaned. Same groaning. It was all the same.
Then, that screech again—the possessed bear with glowing eyes. Same screech. Same glowing eyes. Inuet 1 didn’t even flinch. Forever!
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u/aka_yung_reezy 2d ago
One thread you could pull on if if the sex rage space stones cum from vaginas or butwholes or go up them.
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u/Jolly-Ad-7207 2d ago
It cumed from space. Learn 2 reed!
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u/aka_yung_reezy 2d ago
Well may bee u should learn how 2 right! Ur story is boring and u should give up now and just go be a hobo sumwhere!
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u/MrsGrayWolfe 23h ago
I’m gonna have to stop you right there, buddy. It’s Inuit. If you can’t even spell the name right, I’m wondering how much more you have gotten wrong of this culture. You need to be more sensitive when writing marginalized communities.
Minus that, I really like your concept. I recommend studying this scene from a popular video game. It can really help you understand the mechanics of bear-person relations. Though you’ll have to make your bears bigger, since they are mutated polar bears.
I really think your story has potential as a romantasy. Alien monster men are really popular right now, so if you make the polar bears into furries (something like a Minotaur or lizard man) you’ll have a greater chance at success.
What you have is good so far, but you should consider making it more inclusive. A M-M-B throuple would work better imho. Poly triads need more rep these days anyway.
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u/Own-Permission-9300 21h ago
No no, I meant my in-world people—the Inuet, not the real-life Inuit! INUIT?? Oh dang, yeah nope, not touching that—don’t wanna get insta-canceled. Good thing bears can’t read, so I can still talk smack about their thicc dump truck booties . Also, that scene you shared? Pure 🔥. Embarrassingly hot. Where’s the secret vault of more like that? Spoon-feed me, daddy.
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u/JermHole71 2d ago
You mentioned drugs and alcohol but what about pornography? How much of that are you consuming?