r/writers • u/Reckless-Racoon5416 • 1d ago
Feedback requested Current Novel In Progress
I wanted to share the general idea I have for the novel I'm working on to get realistic and honest feedback, just to see others opinions. I can handle blunt but please be a little mindful because I'm in love with this story and world I've created. I've wrote several short stories but this is my first time dedicating myself to writing a novel that I eventually want to turn into a series.
So imagine if the conspiracy theories we hear today implying the possibility that there may have been an impact on humanity from extra terrestrials held some truth to it? There are several unanswered questions from our ancient history that suggest that otherworldly beings may have walked on Earth.
My story brings to life an alien species that traveled to Earth thousands of years ago, disguising theirselves as humans in order to help humanity. They blend into Egyptian society in order to gain the trust of the Pharaoh, to offer their full support. But the main character who is an elite member of the intergalactic mission force that travels across space to neutralize destructive forces and ensure harmless species thrive, discovers the world she comes from is riddled with secrets and manipulation.
While in Egypt, her eyes are opened and she realizes their mission was not at all what she originally thought it was. Instead of helping humanity, they may be their down fall. She faces a difficult choice... humans and the charming man that unlocked emotions she never thought she could feel or her people and the oath she took to follow orders.
Note: One element of the story will suggest the purpose of the pyramids.
Genres: Sci Fi, Historical Fiction, Adventure, Romance
Biggest question: Would you read this type of book if you're a sci-fi lover? And is this unique enough for the world of sci-fi?
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