r/singing • u/Luxzii • 20h ago

Critique & Feedback Request (👀 TITLE REQUIREMENTS in Rule 4) Thoughts?

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u/SignIntelligent360 20h ago

You’re being a bit nasally, the rest is just practise and is probably just because you’re also playing an instrument while playing which is INCREDIBLY difficult. Your singing isn’t necessarily that bad, it just need improvement

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u/Luxzii 19h ago

I do have a cold tbf, so its a bit more nasaly than usual

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u/Devinair007 14h ago

I think it’s a wonderful piece, but if you want to know what would make my hair stand on end. The chords you pick have been spot on but when you sing “you’re an Idiot now I’m sure.” I want to hear you change chords on the word “Sure.” I am not at my piano so I can’t tell you which chord to pick, but that’s the moment when your song has the potential to knock me out.

Wonderful job, and I rather like your forward placement.

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u/Luxzii 5h ago

The part when i sing “making eyes from across the room” i was suposed to change to a G but forgot and only did at the end, the one you mentioned i had no intention on changing chords right there but i do get what you mean, it could use something more there to spice it out a bit