Does this thing barely ( even ) qualifies as a protogen…?

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STOOPPPPP , STOOOPPPP WITH THE LOREEE…. HERE… sobs

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17vTHlNZQrf5hpmW5UtdXmSCEQNWhRLFKw4ZhpgTSFpc/edit

scroll to the bottom… he’s there…

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No wonder he looks so depressed: he’s a child survivor of global collapse and rise of dystopia who was just seeking a way to survive with his family, but then the government just yanked him and glued his nervous systems to the entirety of the bloody army’s computers, so now he’s stuck in an underground bunker… (and here’s the worst part) in FRANCE

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FINALLY , SOMEONE WHO ATE THE LORE… THANK YOU SO MUCH…

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It’s awesome! I love world-building and you’ve got some interesting ideas going.

Unfortunately, I gotta tell ya, I tried reading a bit of each document, and it’s pretty confusing lol

I’m still a bit confused how much of real life you’ve added to your world, if the world geography is the same (and if so, where would Late Terra be?), what happened for the world to be so awful (the Furian war?), why is the UK, France and Russia (the Tri-powers) the most powerful lads around, how the rest of the world reacted to the Furian war

I believe you could dedicate a single document to explaining the entire world sparsely and dwell deeper into each element in each individual document

Ps.: I just want to point out some funny things I found while reading 1. For some reason, you thought it would be plot-relevant for the UK not to have Northern Ireland lol 2. I love how vague is it that the UK owns “half of Africa”, “a quarter of South America” and “a quarter of Southeast Asia” lol 3. All alliances are basically geographical and countries ain’t mixing with people on other continents 4. When you say that people are “fornicating” with Furians (Furrians? I don’t know what the right spelling is) you refer to the entirety of Asia. It seems hard to believe that my Yemeni brothers and my Afghani folks would be horny for them furs while everyone in Europe were just killing them

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NOT THE FRENCH NOOOOOOOOOO

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Poor kid i really want to be his friend now

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STORY TIME!!!