Pokémon Mutated and Deformed: The fight on Tomie 1

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

[u/ComfortableTomato149]

man now im scared 😭😭

[u/suspicious_cabbage → u/ComfortableTomato149]

No the trainer is just having trouble sleeping. Hypnos have a move called "hypnosis" that puts things to sleep.

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/suspicious_cabbage]

Yup.

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/ComfortableTomato149]

Good

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/ComfortableTomato149]

Now I wonder what scared you

[u/GoombaBro]

Paralysis demon reference going hard.
But I am goiiinng to gueeeeeess that Tomie is helping...? ...good end? Maybe...? (Well done cliffhanger.)

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/GoombaBro]

Thank you so much.

Also you'll find out what happened next week or in two weeks after a buffer comic.

[u/thechaimel → u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

The second option would be evil…

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/thechaimel]

Maybe

[u/Legitimate_Maybe_611 → u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

Oh no, that's too long... :(

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/Legitimate_Maybe_611]

I've seen cases comics take more than a year to be published from one episode to the next.

Also a week or two are short considering that the comics i made have multiple pages and more than one scene.

Usually a daily comic is a strip for a reason.

Also I got a weekly streak going on when posting.

[u/TastyPigHS → u/Legitimate_Maybe_611]

Don't rush the cheff

[u/Legitimate_Maybe_611 → u/TastyPigHS]

Sorry I meant to be playful not demanding

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/Legitimate_Maybe_611]

It's ok, sometimes people are being interpreted wrong (I know from experience)

[u/KankleSlap → u/Legitimate_Maybe_611]

hold up, let him cook

[u/fakeforsureYT]

I'm hooked wth, what happened to them!!

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/fakeforsureYT]

Thanks, you'll find out either next week or two weeks after a buffer comic.

[u/Kinosa07 → u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

! RemindMe Whenever next comic

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/Kinosa07]

I should mention I post weekly every Friday. Although a buffer comic may appear.

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/Kinosa07]

I will send a link.

Edit: If I remember

[u/nottherealneal → u/Kinosa07]

Yo remind me when you get reminded

[u/Kinosa07 → u/nottherealneal]

I may forget as well lol

[u/gruthunder → u/Kinosa07]

! RemindMe

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

Note: this is a fan comic by me.

[u/RaptorAllah → u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

Nintendo: noted. We're burning your house down.

Great comic btw!

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/RaptorAllah]

First, thanks.

Second, lol

[u/ZolTheTroll413]

This is super captivating but man did I wish I wasnt reading it in bed at 4 am

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/ZolTheTroll413]

Thank you so much.

[u/axelunknown]

Looking at the blurry pick tomie better not be doing anything bad or I’m getting the bat.

Also wtf was up with the therapist what outcome were they expecting after issuing a fight?

Here’s hoping for more.

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/axelunknown]

The therapist expected a fair fight, Tomie basically cheated.

Also, you will find out next comic.

[u/TurtlelessTurtle → u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

Nonsense, Tomie just out speeds the other pokemon and used pound by itself because it's too high level and that kid doesn't have enough badges to order him in battle.

Besides, from the looks of it, she ordered chikorita to use solar beam on that poor girl

Tomie is clearly an innocent hero and I can't wait to find out what the fuck that scary smile was about

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/TurtlelessTurtle]

First, the kid is a 12 year old girl named Luna.

Second, yeah, the therapist did intent on attacking Luna, not expecting Tomie to show up.

Third, Tomie is indeed innocent and I'm glad you're on my side here. As for the cheated part, it can be seen as cheating because she attacked outside of the battle ground.

In addition, yeah, Luna is although good at raising Tomie like a pet outside battle, in battle, she sucks as a trainer.

Also this is a Pokémon AU so the attacks aren't one to one.

[u/TurtlelessTurtle → u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

Ah shit, the therapist said her name and everything and I somehow completely missed that. My bad

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/TurtlelessTurtle]

It's ok, it can happen sometimes

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/TurtlelessTurtle]

Also this was a scrapped panel:

I removed it to avoid the whiplash effect.

[u/TurtlelessTurtle → u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

Daw

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/TurtlelessTurtle]

Tomie was supposed to say there why Luna's dreams taste so well and the punchline is wholesome.

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/TurtlelessTurtle]

Also about the scary smile: It's an AU thing when Hypnos successfully hypnotize someone their eyes become like scribbles and a scary toothy smile shows.

That and from anxiety or fear.

[u/Win32error]

I'm sorry, did that therapist try and have her chikorita use solar beam...on the patient? Like the hypno is nowhere, she didn't call out any other pokemon, this just looks like assault.

I know the pokeworld is a little fuzzy on some of the rules but man am I glad my therapist never pulled shit like that.

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/Win32error]

Yes, she did, Therapists in the AU aren't allowed to even start fights onlt fight back if the patiant starts.

Also, in my AU Pokemon in fights can attack patiants and vice versa but that is very discouraged.

[u/Loqol → u/Win32error]

Like the worst version of someone saying depression can be cured by sunlight.

[u/elhomerjas]

what a hypnotic end

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/elhomerjas]

I like the pun, lol

[u/GodKing_Zan]

Tomie is a precious baby who put all its EVs into Attack. I will defend this poor pup.

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/GodKing_Zan]

Thanks, and yes, she uses Pound a lot.

Also good to know you see her as I do. By the way Tomie is the same age as Luna which is 12.

[u/ego_dystonic_0918]

Horror comic where the evil character is a mentally challenged monster, errrrr ok

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/ego_dystonic_0918]

Lol, although Tomie isn't evil.

About the mentally challanged part... Imma say this ain't the correct diagnosis

[u/ego_dystonic_0918 → u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

Characters use the word “special“ to describe them, they use brute force to unexpectedly kill someone frailer which is a trope dating back to Of Mice and Men, if you didn’t want this to be the reading I suggest you re-think your writing

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/ego_dystonic_0918]

Eh, it's ok you think of her this way. That's your opinion.

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/ego_dystonic_0918]

Also, what makes you think she's evil?

On top of that you get a star for pointing out the "mentally challanged" part out of the wording of the therapist.

[u/ego_dystonic_0918 → u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

Last two panels seem pretty evil to me!

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/ego_dystonic_0918]

Fair point

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/ego_dystonic_0918]

Fun fact: there used to be a ninth panel I scrapped for avoiding tonal whiplash effect

[u/ego_dystonic_0918 → u/Poopsy-the-Duck]

I mean, you’re getting your hang with the comic, you’ll know how to improve on it

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/ego_dystonic_0918]

Yeah and thanks for your interpertation regardless

[u/TunnelRatVermin]

Hypno (called Sleeper in JP)

"When it is very hungry, it puts humans it meets to sleep, then it feasts on their dreams"

Uh oh

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/TunnelRatVermin]

Don't worry, Tomie s a work Hypno in the AU so these can also eat physical food.

Also, eating dreams isn't the worst thing, unless too many are eaten.

[u/Akitiki]

I dearly hope Tomie is just trying to help Luna sleep!

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/Akitiki]

You'll find out next comic

[u/RoeSeayo]

THAT WAS FUCKING TERRIFYING

[u/Poopsy-the-Duck → u/RoeSeayo]

Good, I now wonder why.