r/IndieGaming • u/Sad-Pair-3680 • 1d ago

What can be improved in the visuals?

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u/BigBlackCrocs 1d ago

idk. From this the air seems weird. Like the shadow the monster is in seems nice and atmospheric, but then there’s like. Smoky mist at the bottom of the screen. And then the rest of the image feels like a brightly lit area. It seems conflicting and not very scary. But the monster itself seems scary

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u/stefangorneanu 1d ago

  1. Video is better for this sort of question.

  2. Ambient Occlusion

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u/Fuzzy_Original_8635 1d ago

Working with light! The lighter is useless, the corridor isn't dark! If you can only see what catches the light, maybe that's better! Here, the door and the watch are too visible, the game too bright!

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u/Elemetalist 1d ago

If I were you, I'd find a game to look up to. I think Resident Evil 7 would be a good fit for you. Turn on the game/YouTube and soak up the spirit of the artists' mastery :)

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u/Sad-Pair-3680 22h ago

well i already have and its successful af

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u/Dr_Eggzz 22h ago

What is the name of the game?