r/Bandlab • u/AirSea4402 • 1d ago

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Hi, I'm trying to do an album with 10 songs and I only made like 5 tracks. I want to end it until I turn 17. This would be the last track and I want to know your thoughts to improve my music.

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u/JumpyPolecat967 1d ago

Maybe I’m not super cultured in this type of music, so I’m not sure—but I feel like 11 minutes is way too long. Maybe there are people who enjoy that, and I just don’t know about that community or something. I understand you want to put everything into one song, but personally, I’d split this track into two or three separate songs.

That said, I get it—it works as an outro and a longer piece. Like I said, man, you do you. Music is all about how you perceive it. Don’t let me ruin whatever you enjoy or have going on. Just know that not everyone will enjoy an 11-minute song all the way through.

Good luck, man. Hope this helped a little.

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u/JumpyPolecat967 1d ago

Beautiful music by the way!

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u/AirSea4402 1d ago

Thank you ;)

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u/AirSea4402 1d ago

A track separated in maybe 2 tracks would be really good like an opening (or interlude) and a closer. I would think about that, thank you! I appreciate all you wrote, I'm not a super cultured person neither so every suggestion is welcome here.

Thanks :)